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What ever ooze from that thing, you call mind!
Rio -> Brasilia
Latin america has a very wonderful history.
But one of them which was an enigma for me when I was younger and reading history or geography, is low population of Brasilia the capital of Brazil, even though the country is among the most populated and overcrowded ones. That lasts until sometimes later I found their capital has been changed recently.
here is the story:
As you may know though Brazil is one the richest countries in the world, much of it has not yet been developed.
Mainly for this reason the Brazilian government decided to have a new city built 900km (600 miles) in north-west of Rio de Janeiro. Furthermore designed by the great architect Lucio Costa, the new city, Brasilia, replaced Rio as the capital of the state in 1960.
For avoiding future problems Brasilia has been carefully planned for modern living. Even it's wide roads, which can take up to fourteen lanes of traffic, have been kept away from living areas.
But at first, the government had great difficulties in persuading people to leave Rio and settle in Brasilia. However since 1960 it's population has been growing all the time and it has quickly established itself as the capital of the country, even now it's still a medium city in compare to other cities of Brazil mainly São Paulo and Rio.
Although of those things, some say the idea to have the capital moved so far inland will have a great effect on the future of Brazil.
But one of them which was an enigma for me when I was younger and reading history or geography, is low population of Brasilia the capital of Brazil, even though the country is among the most populated and overcrowded ones. That lasts until sometimes later I found their capital has been changed recently.
here is the story:
As you may know though Brazil is one the richest countries in the world, much of it has not yet been developed.
Mainly for this reason the Brazilian government decided to have a new city built 900km (600 miles) in north-west of Rio de Janeiro. Furthermore designed by the great architect Lucio Costa, the new city, Brasilia, replaced Rio as the capital of the state in 1960.
For avoiding future problems Brasilia has been carefully planned for modern living. Even it's wide roads, which can take up to fourteen lanes of traffic, have been kept away from living areas.
But at first, the government had great difficulties in persuading people to leave Rio and settle in Brasilia. However since 1960 it's population has been growing all the time and it has quickly established itself as the capital of the country, even now it's still a medium city in compare to other cities of Brazil mainly São Paulo and Rio.
Although of those things, some say the idea to have the capital moved so far inland will have a great effect on the future of Brazil.
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2- obey the punctuation rules: adjective clauses need (,) before and after them!: ,which was an enigma..... ,
3- although your sentence seems syntactically right, it is not rationally correct!!! : One of them, which was sth, is sth!!!
4- populated and overcrowded are synonyms, don't use consecutive syns!!!
5- the low population of
6-populated ones? which ones?
8- i found out that....found alone means to be able to locate something you seek! find out is another verb!!!
9- although brasil is...
10- much of it?
11- Mainly for this reason should not come at first!!!
12- to avoid
13- the streets IN the cities are often called highways ! road connect cities to each other!
14- living area!!!? urban areas? inhabited areas? You are thinking in persian!!!
15-avoid long sentences!!!
16- however..... , even???? what is the structure? : However..... country. Even must contrast the contents of the last sentence, but the last sentence itself has been a contrast!!!!
17- in comparison
18- like sao paolo or rio
19-although of those things? Despite the mentioned facts,
20- to have the capital moved means: to give somebody the job to move the capital!!!!
21- use simple, structures, structures that you know well. You can not play and manipulate those structures that you are not completely in control of!!!they will "angool" you:))
22- the topic was simple, but you destroyed it by trying to hard to show your ability in english!!! You might end up like me. Toefl is not a place for that!
23- avoid long sentences!!!
24- Do not think in Persian. try to use english expressions!
22- too hard